As Christened Ships Set Sail – A Villanelle
Each maiden voyage has its’ stowaway
I backseat-rode the minivan with Jen
My mother came along on my first date
For dinner lest my lovely date should spend
Each maiden voyage has its’ stowaway
For mum my mother made with bow and pin
My mother came along on my first date
The camera in her family’s humble den
Each maiden voyage has its’ stowaway
Dropped off at homecoming game and parade
But soon enough she picked us up again
My mother came along on my first date
She promised we would have her home by ten
Each maiden voyage has its’ stowaway
4 Comments:
At 9/19/2007 1:46 AM, Matt said…
i had to write a poem about my first date for my creative writing class
this baby is a villanelle...an old French closed form poem...
it is in iambic pentameter
with a strict rhyme scheme
and a pair of refrains that
adhere to the poetic tradition
of villanelles which includes
"Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night" by Dylan Thomas
http://www.bigeye.com/donotgo.htm
At 9/21/2007 10:38 AM, D.O. said…
That's cool. I like that style.
At 9/23/2007 1:30 AM, faith said…
wow i love you! this is great, man. it's so fun! you really are buckling down, huh? i knew it. i think i've heard you talk about your mom coming on your first date, right? at least your mom is fun.
At 10/02/2007 5:23 PM, Anonymous said…
This is great stuff, Matt.
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