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Thursday, April 26, 2007

Sparrows (a haiku)




















nimble song pilots
noble killers of no one
only crushing seeds

8 Comments:

  • At 4/26/2007 8:25 PM, Blogger Matt said…

    i know it is a humble offering for a long overdue update...

    but i've been writing/talking haiku form a lot lately.

    this one came to me walking up to Austin Community College for my statistics class (which i'm actually passing!)

    happy Spring!

     
  • At 4/26/2007 8:29 PM, Blogger Matt said…

    and haiku is a japanese form poem having:

    five syllable line
    then seven syllable line
    then another five

    in case you forgot :))<>((:

     
  • At 5/03/2007 12:50 PM, Blogger robin said…

    hey there matt graham,

    i found a friend this week who reminds me a lot of you -->
    http://www.aaronhalemusic.com/
    http://www.myspace.com/aaronhale
    he's a funny fella and very creative. his dad owns an african mission organization in lubbock.

    anyhow, i went to listen to him sing last night, and he brought in this guy from washington d.c. named andy zipf ... have you ever heard him? oh boy. he's so good! has a beautifully clear voice. plus he has red hair, so that makes him a little cooler in my book.
    http://andyzipf.com/
    http://www.discrevolt.com/groups/view/111

    the end. :)

    happy trails,
    robin

    p.s.
    i like your haiku

     
  • At 5/03/2007 2:15 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    I like your poem
    Even though it's really short
    It's still a good one


    (I bet you get a lot of comments in haiku form this time)

    I also like the haiku about haiku.

    That's clever.

     
  • At 5/07/2007 12:27 AM, Blogger Q said…

    When I first came here
    You said, "Comment in haikus."
    Well fine. Here you go.

    Really. Read old posts.
    Like April Twenty Second
    The one from 06.

    Remember that "rule?"
    I think you just made that up.
    Because you hate me.

     
  • At 5/08/2007 6:47 PM, Blogger Vanessa Houk said…

    Happy Birthday!

     
  • At 5/13/2007 4:01 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    this is the ben folds version of that iron & wine song your friend mentioned the other day. check it out!

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4KI78874qbU

     
  • At 5/21/2007 3:42 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Faith sips lemon tea
    Justice wanders aimlessly
    Grams sold on sixth street

    *jnnxnjni - GenX Ninja Genie

     

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